*as of ‘2 NOVEMBER 2023’*
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(“persistence is the name of the game…”)
(“holocaust kids”)
VERSE 1:
there’s fresh meat on ninth street
and it’s only a dimebag away…
she’s a bum bum (she’s a thoroughly ripened plum)
plucked out of time for a day
VERSE 2:
he’s taking pictures of the police
brooklyn is the town where she came from
took off to japan, landed in jail then
stashed bout a dimebag away
VERSE 3:
a dumpster hunter done jumped her
so she decided that she probably shouldn’t stay
called from the payphone when she was home alone
come baby what do you say?
BRIDGE 1:
that’s when it started to rain
exposing my pain to the elements
wash ‘way the evidence
rain, wash away my pain, wash away my pain
‘cause when the clouds roll through, i’m gonna dial dial her number again
(for when the clouds come through…)
VERSE 4:
called from the payphone when she was home alone
come baby what do you say?
she screened ma calls then (‘hello’), I’ll never call her again!
call the captain to take me away
*police dispatch*
a naked body, condition spotty
spotted right near the tent by the bay
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*SCRAPS*
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*CHORDS*
*NOTES*
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*SECTION 1*
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*SECTION 2*
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*INTRO*
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*lead-in lyrix* —>
“XXX”
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*SONIC SNAPSHOTS*
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XXX
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*MANTRAS*
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XXX
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*FREE-FORM CHANTS*
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XXX
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*OUTRO*
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XXX
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(then…)
*SONIC SUBDIVISIONS*
(* 6 CATEGORIES*)
(‘half of 12’)
(sounds good to me (+ my ‘fellow duodecimalists’)
(cue ‘the creeps’ fadeout)
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*TITLE*
*INTRO*
*VERSES*
*REFRAIN*
*BRIDGES*
*OUTRO*
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*SONG TITLE* —>
*WORKING TITLES*
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*ALTERNATE TITLES*
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*INTRO*
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*guitar riffs*
*dynamic changes*
*sonic ‘layers’ / ‘textures’ ‘added*
(until the ‘song proper kicks in)
(auka “verse 1”
(a ‘narrative’)
(maybe with (‘tempo’ / ‘time signature’ / ‘key’ change))
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*VERSE #*
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(aim for *12*)
(use at least *3*)
(“relative verse”)
2 verses that are identical minus a ‘word change’ or 2*
(for ‘first verse’ –? ‘final verse’)
“VIGNETTES”
“SLICES OF LIFE”
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*REFRAIN*
XXX
*HOOKS*
*LAYERED VOCAL HARMONIES*
*LAYER INSTRUMENTAL TEXTURES*
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*BRIDGE*
XXX
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*OUTRO*
*into ‘counterpoint’ vocal free-form fade-outs*
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“first things first…”
*determine ‘pertinent playlist placement(s’*
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*👨🔬🕵️♀️🙇♀️*SKETCHES*🙇♂️👩🔬🕵️♂️*
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👈👈👈☜*“CLOUD 9”* ☞ 👉👉👉
*THE BASIX*
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💕💝💖💓🖤💙🖤💙🖤💙🖤❤️💚💛🧡❣️💞💔💘❣️🧡💛💚❤️🖤💜🖤💙🖤💙🖤💗💖💝💘
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*🌈✨ *TABLE OF CONTENTS* ✨🌷*
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🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥*we won the war* 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥