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(via TAXI)
(who did not forward the song)
you’ve got lots of creative elements here! The band has a unique sound. You have some tasty melodic ideas, and they fit naturally over the chord changes. Cool idea to double the vocals to give them a nice thickness and depth. It seems to me like the background vocal parts come in a little too soon into the mix. You effectively let the track build by bringing in more and more sonic textures, but it does seem like there might be a little too much going on as the track progresses. It starts to get sort of distracting from the song itself. In other words, it’s tough to really focus on the vocal melody and lyrics during the second half of the song. It might be beneficial to go a little simpler with the arrangement.
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(4:4)
(Cmajor)
(145 bpm)
INTRO:
[(C) (Am Amsus2 Am)] x 2
(bass: C (G) A (C))
VERSE 1:
(reference notes: E3 E3 E3 G3 C4 B3 A3 G3 G3 E3 G3)
[(C) (Am Amsus2 Am Am7)] x 2
(i remembering waking up in the morning)
(bass: C (G) A (C) C (G) A (C))
(C) (D9) (G) … (G6 G6 G6 G6 G Gsus2)
(blasting ‘guns ‘n roses’ i ran a red)
(bass: C (E) D (C A F#) G (A))
(Am) (F Fmaj7 F6 F) (Fmaj7) (C) (Csus2 C)
(riff: DEDE trill)
(but the cop just let me off with a warning)
(bass: A (E) F (A) C (G))
(G) (G7) (G6 G Gsus2) (C)
(“just go ahead” … said ‘sergeant ed’)
(bass: G (A B) C)
VERSE 2:
[(C) (Am Amsus2 Am Am7)] x 2
i remember bringing breakfast to grandma
(bass: C (G) A (C) C (G) A (C))
(C) (D9) (G) … (G6 G6 G6 G6 G Gsus2)
dozen bagels…dozen donuts for all…
(bass: C (E) D (C A F#) G (A))
(Am) (F Fmaj7 F6 F) (Fmaj7) (C) (Csus2 C)
i recall the old man gave me a hard time…
(bass: A (E) F (A) C (G))
(G) (G7) (G6 G Gsus2) (C)
“catch the ball, just catch the ball”
(bass: G (A B) C)
REFRAIN 1:
(reference notes: C4 E4 G4 E4 D4 C4 … C4 C4 C4 D#4 D4 C4 D4)
(C Csus2 C) (F7 F7+6 F7)
so farewell my friend…it’s been a fabulous ride but i…
(C) (Amsus4 Am)
spent too much….
(C7 C7sus4 C7) (G Gsus4 Gsus2 G G6 G)
(riff FEFE ?)
time in the queue…
(bass: C (G E) F (A) C (G) A (C) C (Bb) G (B))
(C)
one…
(C+sus2 C+ C+sus2)
final ride…
(Fmaj7 Fsus2 Fmaj7)
line up for the water…for the water…
(Fm6 Fm)
slide…
(Csus4 C Csus4) (G6 G) (C)
slide down that waterslide with you…
(bass: C (D E) F (G#) C (G) G (B) C)
(*GUITAR SOLO OVER VERSE CHORDS*)
VERSE 3:
(C Am Amsus2 Am) (C Am Amsus2 Am)
(i remember waiting out by the payphone)
(bass: C (G) A (C) C (G) A (C))
(C) (D9) (G) (G6 G6 G6 G6 G Gsus2)
travis frost the hedgehog waited there too
(bass: C (E) D (C A F#) G (A))
(Am) (F) (Fmaj7 F6 F)
thought i saw your car, i’m ready for the…
(bass: A (E) F (A))
(Am) (E7) (Am)
long road home
(bass: A (E) E (G#) A)
(G) (G7) (G6 G Gsus2) (C)
(riff: D E D E D E)
but it wasn’t you…
…no it wasn’t you (no no no no)
(bass: G (A B) C)
REFRAIN 2:
(C Csus2 C) (F7 F7+6 F7)
and even the bums have umbrellas tonight…bet she’s
(C) (Amsus4 Am)
thinking i…
(C7 C7sus4 C7) (G Gsus4 Gsus2 G G6 G)
don’t have a clue…but there’s still…
(bass: C (G E) F (A) C (G) A (C) C (Bb) G (B))
(add backing harmonies)
(C)
time in the…
(C+sus2 C+ C+sus2)
night…yea i’ve got some…
(Fmaj7 Fsus2 Fmaj7)
time to get my timing…
(Fm6 Fm)
right…yea…
(Csus4 C Csus4) (G6 G) (C)
i’ll save a space by the fire for you…yea, there’s a…
(bass: C (D E) F (G#) C (G) G (B) C)
(C)
space
(C+sus2 C+ C+sus2)
tonight (if you want it) where the
(Fmaj7 Fsus2 Fmaj7)
fireworks are burning
(Fm6 Fm)
bright (c’mon)
(Csus4 C Csus4) (G6 G) (C)
i’ll save a space by the fire for you
(bass: C (D E) F (G#) C (G) G (B) C)
(Csus4 C Csus4) (G6 G) (C)
space by the fire for you
(“…safe by the fireplace”)
(bass: C (G) G (B) C)
(Csus4 C Csus4) (G6 G) (C)
(space by the fire for you)
(bass: C (G) G (B) C)
(Am) (Fm6) (C)
*THE END*
(bass: A (E) F (G#) C)
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11.14.17:
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(11.14.17)
(@ “dekalb subway station”)
(brooklyn)
(tuesday night)
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