(via TAXI)
(who did not forward the song)
you’ve got lots of creative elements here! The band has a unique sound. You have some tasty melodic ideas, and they fit naturally over the chord changes. Cool idea to double the vocals to give them a nice thickness and depth. It seems to me like the background vocal parts come in a little too soon into the mix. You effectively let the track build by bringing in more and more sonic textures, but it does seem like there might be a little too much going on as the track progresses. It starts to get sort of distracting from the song itself. In other words, it’s tough to really focus on the vocal melody and lyrics during the second half of the song. It might be beneficial to go a little simpler with the arrangement.