8.21.17:
V3 (1:40)
good start
shaky
second attempt shaky
gets smooth
triplet lonely old people – too exaggerated
too unsteady
good notes
V3 (5:50)
second attempt a bit shaky
good vocal tone
good lonely people intro
V3 (11:25)
shaky start – train running
ok lonely old people
maybe better before
exaggerated triplets
V3 (15:55)
shaky start
a bit out of tune
a bit ouf ot tune
lonely old people
V4 (11:00)
good start
good end
V8 (2:40)