“treat her gently / lonely old people” (clips)

8.21.17:

V3 (1:40)
good start
shaky

second attempt shaky
gets smooth
triplet lonely old people – too exaggerated
too unsteady
good notes

V3 (5:50)
second attempt a bit shaky
good vocal tone

good lonely people intro

V3 (11:25)
shaky start – train running

ok lonely old people
maybe better before
exaggerated triplets

V3 (15:55)
shaky start
a bit out of tune

a bit ouf ot tune
lonely old people

V4 (11:00)
good start

good end

V8 (2:40)

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